2023考研英语：邀请信范文赏析二
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Dear Xiaoqiang,
There will be a banquet to celebrate the admission of Beijing University for our best friend Tracy in my home on January 5,2023. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at five O'clock in the afternoon. This will be followed by a hearty dinner which my wife will cook. At around seven O'clock,we will hold a small dancing ball that I think everybody would enjoy it.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before December 28,2023.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Xiaoqiang,
There will be a banquet to celebrate the admission of Beijing University for our best friend Tracy in my home on January 5,2023. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at five O'clock in the afternoon. This will be followed by a hearty dinner which my wife will cook. At around seven O'clock,we will hold a small dancing ball that I think everybody would enjoy it.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before December 28,2023.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2023考研英语：邀请信范文赏析一
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Dear Dr.Wang,
There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Dr.Wang,
There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2023考研英语：投诉信范文赏析二
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a freshman of this college. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the service rendered in our flat apartments.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is that there is still lacking necessary amenities for our daliy life. In the first place, just taking a warm shower still seems to be impossible as the weather gets colder than before. In addition, even scarcely can hot drinking water be provided continously. Under the circumstances, I find it dismal to go on with everything in the following day and night.
I appreciate it very much if you could pay prompt attention to the problems, preferably solve all of them as soon as possible, and I would like to have this matter settled by this winter around the corner.
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a freshman of this college. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the service rendered in our flat apartments.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is that there is still lacking necessary amenities for our daliy(拼写错误，改为daily) life. In the first place, just taking a warm shower still seems to be impossible as the weather gets colder than before. In addition, even scarcely can hot drinking water be provided continously(拼写错误，改为continuously). Under the circumstances, I find it dismal to go on with everything in the following day and night.
I appreciate it very much if you could pay prompt attention to the problems, preferably solve all of them as soon as possible, and I would like to have this matter settled by this winter around the corner.
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
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