雅思小作文高分范文 第一篇
诚实，对任何人来说都是难能可贵的，如果我们要想在这个世界得到别人的信任和尊重，那么就少不了诚实待人的品质。
那一次，我们班上进行了物理考试，怀着忐忑不安的心情，我们终于等到了宣布分数的那天。”李薇72分，肖萧74分，向鹏68分……”老师满脸严肃地一一念着我们的分数。虽然我认为我能考好，但仍然没有十足的把握，心中仍然“怦怦”地跳个不停。“王蓉”当那熟悉的名字回荡在我耳边的那一瞬间，我感觉我的双手在不停地颤抖，心跳加速：“咚咚咚”似乎快要蹦到嗓子眼了。心中默念着：一定要拿到高分!一定要拿到高分!“85分”顿时我心中的那只惴惴不安的“小白兔”忽然不见了，内心充满了喜悦，此时的我，别提多高兴了。因为老师告诉我们全班最高分也才87分。相比之下，我的成绩算不错的了，可事情却不是我想象的那么好。当我拿到卷子时，我内心的喜悦瞬间全无：没想到第一大题我错了三题，应该扣九分，而老师却只给我扣了六分。
我的心头似乎被一块千斤巨石压着，连呼吸都觉得困难。我到底应该怎么办才好呢，我的脑海里仿佛有一个天使和一个魔鬼在喋喋不休地争论着，天使告诉我说：“告诉老师吧，长辈教育我们做人要诚实。”我回想起爸妈经常告诉我做人要诚实，做事要坦荡，想到这些，我不由得低下了头。与此同时，有一个魔鬼似乎听见了天使对我的说的话便大声说：“别去，别去，你想想，班上最高分才87分，你第二名呢，如果你告诉老师了，你的名次就降低了。”我感觉我的大脑被它们的争吵声折磨得快要爆炸了，正在我烦躁不安不知如何是好的时刻，有一位同学突然冲上讲台走到老师跟前告诉老师说：“老师，我发现有一道题您多给了我三分。”他的话音刚落，我突然知道我应该怎么做了，于是我抬着头快步地向讲台走去，老师将分数更正过来，我的心情一片晴朗。
通过这次考试，虽然我失去了令人羡慕的高分，但我收获到比分数更有价值的东西—那就是诚实。
雅思小作文高分范文 第二篇
满分范文
The map shows two potential locations (S1 and S2) for a new supermarket in a town called Garlsdon.
The main difference between the two sites is that S1 is outside the town, whereas S2 is in the town centre. The sites can also be compared in terms of access by road or rail, and their positions relative to three smaller towns.
Looking at the information in more detail, S1 is in the countryside to the north west of Garlsdon, but it is close to the residential area of the town. S2 is also close to the housing area, which surrounds the town centre.
There are main roads from Hindon, Bransdon and Cransdon to Garlsdon town centre, but this is a no traffic zone, so there would be no access to S2 by car. By contrast, S1 lies on the main road to Hindon, but it would be more difficult to reach from Bransdon and Cransdon. Both supermarket sites are close to the railway that runs through Garlsdon from Hindon to Cransdon.
雅思小作文高分范文 第三篇
给出一个社会热点问题，探讨产生的原因及解决方案
注意：探讨原因影响解决方案时，从「个人」「社会」「国家」三个不同角度思考
开头段：
It is undoubtedly the case that urban areas around the world increasingly suffer from _(+社会热点问题）________ . There are several reasons for this problem, and various measures could be taken by governments and individuals to improve the situation.
主体1段：There are a variety of different factors that have led to_(+社会热点问题）________ One of the major causes can be that_(+原因1）__________ . The second reason is that_（+原因2）________
主体2段
Despite some obvious reasons described above, there are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems. Firstly, a simple solution would be to _(+措施1）__________ . The second measure would be for governments to _(+措施2）_________
结尾段
In conclusion, despite some obvious reasons, various measures can be taken to tackle the problem of _(+社会热点问题）________
好啦，以上为大作文模版的分享，希望对你有所帮助哦
模版可以帮助我们框定文章结构，像指路标一样让我们随时知道，接下来该写什么
模版也可以起到很好的临时应急作用，让我们在马上要考试前临时突击，不再结构上出现问题，得到基本的分数
但是当然如果想要写作冲击高分，还是要多看范文多多学习仿写里面的词汇，句子和逻辑论证思路，高分范文没有固定的模版，但是都有共同的特点就是 「观点清晰」 「逻辑清晰」「论证紧凑」「上下文前后句衔接流畅」「词汇语法准确度高」「词汇语法多样性强」
雅思小作文高分范文 第四篇
Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people. While some people link happiness to wealth and material success,others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships. Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.
Because people interpret happiness for themselves in so many different ways, it is difficult to give any definition that is true for everyone. However, if there are different kinds of happiness for different individuals then the first step in achieving it would be to have a degree of self-knowledge. A person needs to know who he or she is before being able to know what it is that makes him or her happy.
Of course, factors such as loving relationship, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too. But this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy.
Overall, I think an ability to keep clear perspectives in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness. By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives (the welfare of our families, the quality of our relationships, making other people happy, etc.) and what is not (a problem at work,getting annoyed about trivial things, etc.).
Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.
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雅思小作文高分范文 第五篇
剑桥雅思9test3小作文范文，雅思剑9写作test3task1范文用高分作文，这是一篇高质量的雅思作文范文。雅思高分作文，一共分为两个部分：第一部分，介绍task2和task2。第二部分，介绍了task3和task5的对比。在第一部分，我们需要明确task5的对比：task1和task6对比了，task5是对比了task4和task4，对比了task4，task4是对比了task4，task4是对比了task5，task4是对比了task6。在第二部分，我们需要了解task5和task5是对对对的，task3是对比了task6。这两部分我们需要准备的资料有：task1&writingandcoherence，task5是对照task3，task4是对着听力和阅读的学术性的对照。
雅思小作文高分范文 第六篇
满分范文：
The three bar charts show average years of schooling, numbers of scientists and technicians, and research and development spending in developing and developed countries. Figures are given for 1980 and 1990.
It is clear from the charts that the figures for developed countries are much higher than those for developing nations. Also, the charts show an overall increase in participation in education and science from 1980 to 1990.
People in developing nations attended school for an average of around 3 years, with only a slight increase in years of schooling from 1980 to 1990. On the other hand, the figure for industrialised countries rose from nearly 9 years of schooling in 1980 to nearly 11 years in 1990.
From 1980 to 1990, the number of scientists and technicians in industrialised countries almost doubled to about 70 per 1000 people. Spending on research and development also saw rapid growth in these countries, reaching $350 billion in 1990. By contrast, the number of science workers in developing countries remained below 20 per 1000 people, and research spending fell from about $50 billion to only $25 billion.(184 words)
雅思小作文高分范文 第七篇
I like to travel so much. When holiday comes, I will make travel plans. My friends like travel, too. So we make up the group. Travel means a lot to me. On the one hand, I can broaden my vision. Every city has its own feature and lifestyle, so I can experience different lifestyles. Books can provide us theorical knowledge, but if we go to the place to witness the real scenery, then what we learn from the book will be useful. On the other hand, travel can bring me the new mood. If I live in the same place for a long time and do the same thing every day, my life will be boring. But travel can help me to refresh my mood. When I come back, I am full of energy again.
我喜欢旅游。一到假期，我就会制定旅游计划。我的朋友也喜欢旅游，所以我们会组队一起去玩。旅行对我来说有很大的意义。一方面，我可以拓宽我的视野。每个城市都有自己的特点和生活方式，我可以体验不同的生活方式。书本可以给我们提供理论知识，但是如果我们去那些地方见证真正的风景，我们从书本上学习到的才是真正有用的。另一方面，旅游可以给我带来新心情。如果我很长一段时间一直住在同一个地方，每天做着同样的事情，我的生活就会很无聊。但是旅行能帮我重塑好心情。当我回来时，我就又充满活力了。
高考高分英语作文范文10
At the coming of the new year, it is also the time for one of the biggest tennis matches, the Australian Open. Since Li Na won her second grand slam here, more Chinese people fall in love with tennis. One of the popular male players, Roger Federer, who is more than 30, but he is still in the top level. The fans hope their hero can enjoy the match and they didn’t expect the next grand slam. But Roger made it happen again. He defeated his great rival, Nadal and won Australian Open. The world was cheering for him, and they witnessed this great man to make his career successful at the old age. If we have dreams, it is never too late to pursue. People always take the age as the excuse, actually, they lack of persistence, which differs them from successful men.
雅思小作文高分范文 第八篇
Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?
Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences. We now understand the importance of inherited characteristics more than ever before. Yet we are still unable to decide whether an individual’s personality and development are more influenced by genetic factors(nature) or by the environment (nurture).
Research, relating to identical twins, has highlighted how significant inherited characteristics can be for an individual’s life. But whether these characteristics are able to develop within the personality of an individual surely depends on whether the circumstances allow such a development. It seems that the experiences we have in life are so unpredictable and so powerful, that they can boost or over-ride other influences, and there seems to be plenty of research findings to confirm this.
My own view is that there is no one major influence in a person’s life. Instead,the traits we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences that we encounter in life are constantly interacting. It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person’s personality and dictates how that personality develops. If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behavior and character of a person from the moment they were born.
In conclusion, I do not think that either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both nave powerful effects. How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person’s life.
雅思小作文高分范文 第九篇
1. 积累写作词汇
所以这里我说的积累写作词汇并不是让各位去可以去刻意去积累高级词汇，而是积累一些自己可以在写作里但是自己当时没有想到的词，或者想到了但是不会写的词
随便举个例子，剑10 Test 1 WRITING TASK 2 ：
我相信大家都知道，大作文第一段可以写成引入题目背景（改写）+表述自己观点
接下来一起来看看范文中的在第一段的第一句是如何引入题目背景的这句话的
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.
这句话说的：是孩子们在很小的时候就了解是非的区别是很重要的。
范文第一段第一句：One important stage in a child's growth is certainly the development of a conscience,which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong.
这句话说的是孩子成长的一个重要阶段当然是良心的发育，这与辨别是非的能力有关。
大家再注意到我标注的-conscience良心，跟stage阶段
引入题目的背景的时候，把句子整个同义替换是很low的，范文里面就把区别是非对错可以理解成跟良心的功能有关；小的时候的确就是我们人生中的某个阶段，这样一换，引入题目背景就很自然的同时，还体现了你对题目背景的合理延伸。
所以写作中词汇并不是越高级越好，而是需要你恰当表达意思的时候有恰当的词汇进行表达，能做到就很厉害了，像范文中这些自己没想到用或者想到了不会写的词汇难道不值得你积累下来吗。
2. 积累好用的句型
这里我说的积累好用句型，并不是指非要各位通篇都能做到长难句，而是恰当的意思用恰当的句子进行表达就好了
比如，剑10 Test 1 WRITING TASK 2 范文中的这句话（题目还是上面）
To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish,as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished.
惩罚一个年龄小的孩子是错误又愚蠢的，因为婴儿不明白发生了什么或为什么要惩罚他或她。
这个句子是由主句+原因状语从句构成，说明了惩罚小孩是错误又愚蠢的原因，因果关系显得有理有据。
那么as+句子表达原因的句型，大家就完全可以积累起来，不要碰上原因就统统写because...
3. 形成自己的写作框架
上面谈的词汇跟句型其实都是属于写作的细节，写作除了细节重要外，更加重要的是你的写作框架是否具有合理逻辑。
所以平时除了自己多写之外，记得多分析范文，形成一个自己的写作框架，比如我自己很喜欢的一个大写作框架就是分析Simon的范文形成的
个人见解，仅供参考，你杠你对
开头段：引入题目背景+明确表达自己的观点
主体段（2段）：核心论点-分论点（如有）-再展开论据-再重复核心论点（我觉得没必要，看自己）
注意：论据一定是可以去支持你论点的，别瞎套模版
结尾段：呼应开头段就行了，说白了，重申你的观点
请一定注意！！框架只是参考而已，个人有个人的喜好跟习惯！
最后自学党们，想要提升写作能力，除了积累写作词汇跟句型，多分析范文去形成自己的写作框架之外，还可以多参考高质量的免费公开课（主讲老师是曼切斯特大学语言学教授兼雅思前考官），直接学习大小作文的写法，好用的句型等等，学会了之后，自己多练习，写作不练习是不会有提高的，有条件的话找专业人士给你批改一下，提升得会更快。
雅思备考并不容易，尤其是像写作这种主观性题目，很多学校申请的时候还要看小分，就更加恶心了，所以各位心态放好，该多写就多写，不要让写作拖你出分的后腿。
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