雅思写作范文2023 第一篇
2 easy rules
-never write anything new
-one sentence: repeat, summarize
Conclusion technique
Paraphrase the answer that you gave in your introduction
Four types of question:
1. discussion (+opinion)
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
Introduction
It is true that video surveillance has become commonplace in many cities in recent years. While I understand that critics may see this as invasion of privacy, I believe that there are more benefits than drawback.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would argue that the advantages of using video security systems in public places do outweigh the disadvantages.
2. opinion
Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Introduction
Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not need to contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely disagree with this view.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I do not believe that any financal concessions should be made for people who choose private education.
3. problem and solution
In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
Introduction
It is true that people in industrialized nations can expect to live longer than ever before. Although there will be undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
Conclusion
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.
4. two-part question
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Introduction
It is true that a rich variety of music styles can be found around the world. Music is a vital part of all human cultures for a range reasons, and I would argue that traditional music is more important than modern, international music.
Conclusion
In conclusion, music is a necessary part of human existence,and I believe that traditonal music should be given more importance than international music.
Conclusion sentences
-one sentence
-no new information
-paraphrasing to show variety
雅思写作范文2023 第二篇
4 paragraph essay
-2 main body paragraphs
-5 sentences in each
-90 to 100 words each
2 methods
Ideas, vocabulary, planning
How to write a main paragraph?
2 types
-firstly, secondly, finally (advantages, disadvantages, problems, solutions)
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
3-minute plan:
-disagree for several reasons
-school timetable is full, no time for compulsory service
-students’ work in other subjects would be affected
-teenagers might not want to do it (reluctant, no motivation)
Paragraph 2:
There are several reasons why I would argue against having compulsory service for secondary school students. Firstly, the school curriculum is already full with important academic subjects, such as maths, science and languages. For example, I remember having an extremely busy timetable when I was at high school, and it would not have been possible to add to it. Secondly, students’ performance in other subjects would be affected if valuable study time were taken by charity work or neighborhood improvement schemes. Finally, I believe that teenage students would be reluctant to take part in any programmes of obligatory work, and this could lead to poor motivation and even bad behavior.
Try to write 5 sentences
1. topic sentences
2. firstly (5. Explain more, or add example)
3. secondly
4. finally
Remember: linking words (firstly) do not help your vocabulary score. Examiners want to see topic vocabulary.
-idea, explain, example (one idea, a reason, an opinion)
3-minute plan:
voluntary (not compulsory) community service is possible
-students more motivated if they can choose
-gain work experience, self-confidence, skills
-good for CVs, career, university admissions, employers
Paragraph 3:
On the other hand, the opportunity to do voluntary community service could be extremely positive for high school students. By making these programs optional, schools would ensure that only motivated students took part. These young people would gain valuable experience in an adult working environment, which could help to build their self-confidence and enhance their skills. Having such experience and skills on their CVs could greatly improve school leavers’ career prospects. For example, a period of voluntary work experience might impress a university admissions officer or a future employer.
Try to write 5 sentences
Idea
Explain (2 or 3 sentences)
example
雅思写作范文2023 第三篇
Steps:
1. understanding the task
2. break the task into parts
3. methods, techniques
4. lots of practice
5. feedback, measure progress
Write an essay
-minimum 250 words
-40 minutes
-universal topics
-4 question types
Four scoring criteria
1. task response
2. coherence and cohesion
3. vocabulary
Break the task into parts
-250 words
-4 paragraphs
-about 13 sentences:
Introduction-2 sentences; two main paragraphs-5 sentences each; conclusion-1 sentence
Timing (40 minutes): introduction-5 minutes; main body-20 minutes; conclusion-5 minutes (planning time-10 minutes)
雅思写作范文2023 第四篇
It is universally acknowledged thatxxxStudent are the leader of tomorrowxxx. It is argued that students should experience overseas life to learn the language and culture of the host country. Personally, I would completely agree with this for the following reasons.
众所周知，“学生是明天的领导者”。有人认为，学生应该体验海外生活，学习东道国的语言和文化。就我个人而言，我完全同意这一观点，理由如下。
To begin with, living in a foreign nation is always advantageous to experience a different culture even for a short period of time. One day abroad is one day learnt. Hence, students living abroad usually have better and more thorough understanding of the outside world than those students who do not have these experiences; they also tend to have more open minds to differences in culture and so become more tolerant to other groups of people. Compared to those who learn the cultural values of foreign countries from books and media, students who have overseas living experience can have a broader perspective of the world we live in.
首先，生活在一个外国总是有利于体验不同的文化，即使是很短的时间。一日出国，一日学成。因此，生活在国外的学生通常比那些没有这些经历的学生对外部世界有更好和更透彻的理解;他们也倾向于对文化差异持更开放的态度，因此对其他群体更宽容。与那些通过书籍和媒体了解外国文化价值观的学生相比，有海外生活经历的学生可以对我们生活的世界有更广阔的视角。
Furthermore, having first-hand exposure to the local language is the best way to learn it. The truth is, no matter how much students excel in foreign language courses,they do not usually master the language completely. For example, there are never enough English native speakers in schools to provide a real English speaking community, which may result in students knowing English very well in terms of grammar or reading, but speaking and dialogue comprehension is a big obstacle for them. In contrast, living in the foreign environment gradually improves the learning and accent in speaking and allows them to learn collocations that native speakers normally use in daily conversations.
此外，直接接触当地语言是学习当地语言的最好方法。事实上，不管学生在外语课程上有多优秀，他们通常都不能完全掌握这门语言。例如，学校里从来没有足够的英语母语人士来提供一个真正的英语口语社区，这可能导致学生在语法或阅读方面非常了解英语，但口语和对话理解是他们的一大障碍。相反，生活在外国环境中逐渐提高了他们的学习能力和说话的口音，并允许他们学习母语人士通常在日常对话中使用的搭配。
In conclusion, I firmly hold the view that living in another country for education purposes is advantageous both culture-wise and language-wise.
总之，我坚定地认为，为了教育目的而生活在另一个国家对文化和语言都是有利的。
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雅思写作范文2023 第五篇
Spend 10 minutes, planning your essay
Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
1. read and understand the question-highlight/understand key parts
2. plan your essay structure (4 paragraphs)
Introduction: topic+ answer→2. →3. →4. Conclusion: repeat answer
3. plan ideas for the two main paragraphs (6 minutes)
-brainstorm, note down any ideas you have
-develop ideas in detail
-keep asking yourself why?
-think of examples to support your ideas
-finally, try to group related ideas (number them)
For example:
1Benefits of studying alone (3 minutes)
2Concentrate better, no distractions, focus on the task, 3read book or aritcles,5study at own pace, . when revising for an exam, 4memorise information
1Benefits of group study (3 minutes)
2More ideas, share knowledge, gather more information, . research project, 2learn from each other, 4more motivating, responsibility to the group, sense of competition
雅思写作范文2023 第六篇
Method:
2 sentences
-introduce the topic
-give a general answer
Four types of question:
1. discussion
Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Plan: topic-study in groups or alone
Answer- sometimes better alone, usually better in groups
People have different views about the effectiveness of group study as opposed to working alone. While there are some benefits to studying independently, I believe that group work is usually more productive.
2. opinion
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Plan: topic-community service for all teenagers
Answer-3 choices: agree, disagree, or balanced opinion (when possible)
It is sometimes argued that high school student should be made to do some work in their local communities.
Agree: I completely agree that this kind of scheme would be a good idea.
Disagree: in my opinion, it would be wrong to force teenagers to do any kind of unsalaried work.
Balanced opinion: while I disagree with the idea of making such programs compulsory, I do believe that voluntary community service could benefit young people.
3. problem and solution
Many criminals reoffend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Plan: topic-criminals reoffend
Answer- several reasons, a variety of measures (governments, communities)
It is true that punishments do not always deter criminals from committing more crimes. There are various reasons why offenders repeatedly break the law, but governments could certainly take steps to address this issue.
4. two-part question
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
Plan: topic-job satisfaction
Answer-several factors, unrealistic/important
Work plays a central role in our lives, and we would all like to feel fulfilled professionally. While a variety of factors may lead to job satisfaction, it would be unrealistic to expect everyone to be happy at work.
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